Xempesta- The Raging Dragon

[xempesta]

Name: Xempesta
Gender: Female
Age: 16

Number: 24
Power: She is able to harness the power of dragons, shooting out the qi(life force/flow of energy in Chinese) of a dragon's breath from her hands or fully transforming into one.
Weapon(s): Tantô daggers

Description: Piercing red eyes partially covered by dark bangs and a dragon's twisted horns identify Xempesta as not fully human. Her hair is short and layered, worn in a boyish style, resulting in an androgynous look. Accompanying her intimidating glare is a serious expression, giving her a cold aura. Xempesta is neither tall nor extremely short, and thinner than average. She prefers wearing her hood in public to hide her horns that usually attract unwanted attention.

Personality: Serious, sarcastic, and cool on the outside, Xempesta is not someone to be messed with. She is alert and cautious to the extreme, with a deep suspicion of strangers. At first, she seems straight-laced and unemotional, but as you get to know her, she reveals a more mischievous side. A burning soul of passion and determination is hidden under an icy exterior.

History: Coming from an ancient and lost land, Xempesta is one of the last of her people. Her childhood and homeland is known to none but herself and the remaining descendents of her race.

[Devioux]

......I feel annoyed that there is really nothing to critique. I do have some questions. I know how limiting this profile form can be.

Firstly, what does "straight-laced" mean? Did you mean "straight-faced?"... *Stupid question #1*
Secondly, just to reconfirm: her power ish to shoot out energy and transform into a dwagon? Energy or fire? *Had to ask 'cause she's a dummy-head*

[xempesta]

Straight-laced is serious and abiding by rules.
Think of it as fire that isn't fire. It is fire-like in appearance, but can be different colors, and doesn't burn in the strictest sense, it's like an elemental laser? That changes depending on how you want to use it; it can be used to burn the life out of someone or heal them.

[Devioux]

Ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... Meh likey~ Thanks for clarifying and... I like zat term... *Steals it* XD Anyways...

APPROVED~ *Locks topic and gives the key to Kodiak*

[Ehntrix]

I also approve, not that it incredibly matters.
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